Entombed in Indifference

When the time came, he was certain he would not care. It was undeniable. He had never cared. This would not be any different. When they told him the last day of his life the corners of his mouth jerked faintly, the only indication he’d ever given for a smile. He found it slightly humorous how they looked at him in disgust, some in pity, as if he cared. He really never troubled himself with anything at all. It would be a relief. The last day. On the day they stopped his breath, he would finally breathe.

 

He was shrouded in indifference; like a tomb it had settled its weight upon his soul, becoming more and more oppressive as the time passed.  It was an indifference that kills–literally. He never remembered, at any point in his life, really being sad or angry or happy, as if he had a thing to be happy about. All he recalls is indifference–absolute hollowness.. The hardship he experienced just made him harder, and the few who tried to help him–well, they generally withdrew with their spirits broken. He was void, void of anything, like a vacuum. When he finally found a place he belonged, his family of haters, the Bloods, they called him The Vacuum. He was pretty proud of that nickname. In fact, it continues to be his only source of pride.

 

He had, of course, been called other things throughout his life, particularly toward the end of his freedom: a monster, a wretch, a villain. His favorite was vicious, heartless piece of crap. That one was really meant to get to him, so he relished it the most, imagining the satisfaction on the face of the daughter of the dead man as she pictured him shuddering from her harsh words. Oh how they all thought he’d care, care about something. He didn’t. His lawyer had begged him to “pour out his soul” to the jury in an apology for his actions. Pour out his soul. In order to pour out your soul, you have to have one. His lawyer, Mr. Trayton, was a pretty respectable, powerhouse type of guy, but when he said that to him, he was sure some fear flooded his eyes. Fear was always showing up in the eyes of those who neared him.

 

His only complaint would be the amount of time between his conviction and his death. It was an endless, infinite, brutal amount of time. He would sit in solitary, staring at the wall, hoping for the days to pass. There were no clocks within 100 yards of him, but he was sure he could hear the seconds ticking by, slower than the life of his boss ebbed away. That damn boss of his was a tough one to kill, like a coon.

prison

***

 

Solitary. It is an emotionless man’s worst nightmare. The Vacuum not only lacked emotion, he lacked imagination. Therefore, he often felt his sanity dripping away like the leaky faucet in his cell. When the guard would bring by his meal three times a day, he tried desperately to get him to stay longer than the four seconds it took to feed him. Farmers allotted more time to feeding their pigs than the guards to feeding him.

 

“Where’s your tray?”

 

“Why don’t you come get it?”

 

“If I come get it, you’ll spend the next month recovering.”

 

He always reveled in the guard’s attempt to intimidate him.

 

“I’ll take my chances.”

 

“I want to see your tray up here within 30 seconds or I will beat you bloody, you scumbag.”

 

“Now that’d be a sight to see.”

prison

The Vacuum held his breath as the guard trumped back down the hall, his lack of power infuriating. When The Vacuum realized he had given up and wasn’t coming back, his face fell. He loved interacting with the guards, like when he would trip kids in Kindergarten, just to get the teacher to look his way. No one ever looked his way. He didn’t care. He never cared. The indifference just bred within him–a fungus–growing in the shadows of his soul.

 

***

 

He remembers reading “The Crucible” in high school. He can honestly say that is the only piece of writing he has ever enjoyed, since he’s never been able to read on his own. “The Crucible” was a decent unit, though, because the class read it together and listened to it on tape. It fascinated him– the way normal human beings can turn on one another with no remorse. It made him wonder how anyone could expect him to have remorse, when the most respectable of people don’t seem to have it.

 

The desperation of those on trial made him laugh. He was constantly trying to stifle his laughter in the back row, earning dirty looks from the teacher every few minutes. At the end of the play, his teacher explained to the class how each of the guilty were killed. He will never forget Giles Corey, a kind, elderly man who tried to protect his wife but got them both killed instead. Giles was pressed to death. With each stone laid upon his chest, he was expected to confess to witchcraft, but instead simply said, “More weight.” Eventually the weight of the boulders crushed him. The Vacuum still probably thinks about Giles at least once a day. He is Giles. The weight of his indifference presses in around him, but he just smiles and says, “More weight.”

 

The only real difference between him and Giles is that Giles was innocent.

 

***

 

Three days. Three days left of his life. Then, it would all be over. His soul and his body would finally become one–dead. In just three days. He did not think he would care. As the day got nearer, the emotions began to scream inside of him, like choked, tortured beings. He did not recognize them at first. He did not understand where they came from, always assuming he’d been born without them. They were getting louder.

 

His fear was like night, when it is so dark that you’re not sure if your eyes are open or closed.

 

His remorse was like a knife–the harder he tried to pull it out, the deeper it penetrated.

 

His grief was like quicksand, when you’re whole body has succumbed to its might except your mouth and nose.

 

His loneliness was like a scream, muffled yet strong, fighting to the surface, impossible to ignore.

 

“Where’s your tray?”

 

“I… I wanna know what my…my rights are.”

 

“Your rights?”

 

“Like I get a last meal…Do I get anythin’ else?”

 

“You can request visitation from a reverend. He will bring you the Holy Bible, which I’m sure you will find a way to burn. You are welcome to write letters and send them to whomever you choose. I doubt any recipient will open them.”

 

“A reverend?”

 

“You know, like a pastor? Idiot.”

 

His words came out like soup, hot and slow, “I would…I would like to maybe talk with one of them.”

 

“You’re kidding?”

 

He could still hear the guard’s laughter when he reached the end of the hall. The Vacuum’s skin was itchy. He felt like stepping out of it and leaving it in the corner.

 

***

 

The Vacuum had given up talking to a reverend. He had 24 hours left. The knock came after his evening meal had been picked up. He sensed the height of the moon and the thick, Louisiana night air.

 

“Step back and hold your arms out,” the guard harshly announced his presence.

 

The chains on his body felt heavier than the chains around his soul as he padded down the hallway to an inky, cold room. A small man stood in the corner with his hands folded in front of him. Perhaps, it is Giles Corey, coming to take me to Hell. The Vacuum considered this absurdity for a moment before he was forced into a chair by three men. The men did not leave, but stepped back into the shadows as the small man stepped into the dim, yellow light.

 

He stood there for an uncomfortable moment, looking down at The Vacuum. Instead of sitting down in the chair across from him, the reverend removed the chair and brought it to the same side as him, now both their backs were to the guards.

 

Idiot. Thought The Vacuum.

reverend

The reverend’s voice was muted and warm, “Can you tell me your name?”

 

“You know my name. I’m notorious.”

 

“I would like you to tell me anyway so we could get properly introduced.”

“I’m Giles. I don’t give a damn what yer name is.”

 

“I’m Simon Paltron.” The Vacuum was immediately irritated the way the small man acted as if he did not even hear him.

 

“I said I didn’t care.”

“I heard you,” The Vacuum’s muscles settled slightly into the chair. “Do you know Jesus, Giles?”

 

“I know he is a friend of morons who have nothin’ better to do than believe in fantasy.”

 

“If you truly believe this, why am I here?”

 

The Vacuum was unsure of how to answer this question. He was not sure there was an answer. His emotions. They were eating him from the inside out. He thought perhaps a reverend could smother them once and for all.

 

“I…I guess… I’m feelin’ things I ain’t never felt and I know you dudes’re trained in stuff like that.”

 

“What have you been feeling, Giles?”

 

“Just stuff.”

 

“Perhaps, you feel pain? Remorse? Sadness?”

 

“I guess.”

 

“Did you know it doesn’t have to be this way, Giles?” The Vacuum hated the way the small man kept using his name.

 

“Doesn’t have to be what way?”

 

“You don’t have to be in pain. You can find freedom.”

 

The Vacuum chortled as he looked around his world of stone, which would soon become a world of darkness.

 

“Giles, will you do me the courtesy of listening to a Bible verse for one moment?”

 

“I guess.”

 

“I will read from 2 Corinthians 3:17, ‘Now the Lord is the Spirit, and where the Spirit of the Lord is, there is freedom.’”

 

“Sounds like crap ta me. I don’t know no Lord.”

 

“Giles, He knows you. He is waiting for you to confess your sins to Him. He wants you to join Him in heaven tomorrow night.”

 

“Why the hell would He want that?”

 

“He created you. You are His child.”

 

“I ain’t never been no one’s child.”

 

“You have always been His child and He will always be your Father. If you die tomorrow night without repenting, you will spend eternity separated from Him, in Hell.”

 

“Sounds good ta me. I deserve Hell.”

 

What the small man said next took The Vacuum by surprise, “Yes, you do deserve Hell and so do I.”

 

For the first time, The Vacuum took his eyes off the table and glanced at the small man, whose green eyes gazed at him with something unrecognizable. It wasn’t pity or hatred, the looks he was so familiar with. He couldn’t put his finger on it, but it unnerved him in the same way his emotions were tearing at him.

 

He expected the small man to go on, but instead Simon just sat back in his chair and surveyed The Vacuum. The Vacuum looked straight across the table at the wall on the other side of the room, he observed a spider making his way toward the vent and tried to focus on it. He could feel the small man’s eyes on him; his skin was itching again; he wanted to wipe that look off the small man’s face with one effortless motion of his arm. One hit–that is all it would take for such a small, fragile creature. One hit and he wouldn’t have to take any more of this.

 

Suddenly, the small man spoke, startling The Vacuum. “Giles, do you mind if I pray for you?”

 

“I don’t believe in prayers.”

 

“That’s okay. I will believe enough for the both of us.”

 

What the small man did next almost pushed The Vacuum over the edge. He scraped his chair against the stone floor, the sound echoing up to the corners of the room, and put his hand upon The Vacuum’s forearm.

 

His hand was soft and clammy; it had a slight tremor to it, perhaps due to fear or old age. For the first time in his life, The Vacuum hoped it was old age and not fear. He touched him in a way that signalled to The Vacuum that he did not see the chains on his body. He saw the human being under them, maybe he even saw his soul, too. The Vacuum knew this was nonsense, but the warm touch of the small man’s hand was seeping the logic away from him.

prayer

As Simon began to pray, the prisoner noticed the way he lowered his head and closed his eyes. The Vacuum did the same, not wanting to look stupid. He could no longer see Simon, but he could picture the words bumping against his skin and landing upon his clothes, becoming part of him. Words like forgiveness, heart, love, nearness, peace, and acceptance. These were the types of words The Vacuum always repelled like an alcoholic repels self-control. He didn’t understand everything Simon said, but Simon’s voice had a language of its own. His voice was tranquility; the meaning of the words hardly mattered.

 

For 8 long years, The Vacuum had only thought about time, in a place where seconds acted more like days. During Simon’s prayer however, The Vacuum forgot the existence of time. Simon perhaps prayed until morning, maybe it was only a few minutes. The Vacuum devoured his words the way an orphan does attention. Simon spoke and The Vacuum drank and drank and drank, his words more like water than sound waves.

 

When Simon began reading from the Bible, The Vacuum began to rock back and forth, slightly, swinging to the melody inside his body. His emotions had quieted; his hatred had shriveled like a flower without nourishment; God’s peace breathed into his hollow, desolate soul.

 

***

 

Simon’s voice had gained strength and passion by the time he said, “In Jesus’ Holy name, Amen.” He had moved to a kneeling position beside the prisoner’s chair.

 

Amen echoed throughout the room and throughout the prisoner’s body–he did not look up; he did not open his eyes; he did not cease rocking back and forth.

 

Both of Simon’s hands were on him now and the silence was creating something inside the room. Simon’s voice was gone now, but it was God’s who continued to speak to the prisoner.

 

Eternity passed through the room when the prisoner finally spoke, now even the guards bowed their heads.

 

“Jesus, fergive me. I need lots of healing. I’m a nasty, gross sinner, but I want a Savior. I didn’t know you died fer me. I woulda confessed long time ago had I known that. I want to see you–man to man– tomorrow night. I ain’t got nothin’ to hide. I wanta fergive myself. Please, Jesus, I need you. Please come into my empty stuff and get rid of the hate and the monster–replace all that with yer love. I need you. I need you. I need you. I need you.”

 

Like the loathing used to pour from him, those final words continued to pour from the prisoner’s mouth as the tears, the first in years,  poured from his eyes. Simon allowed it to continue for some time, then, he stood up, placed his hands on the prisoner’s shoulders, and whispered into his ear, “The Lord forgives you. The Lord loves you. You can rest comfortably in this inarguable fact.”

 

***

 

After more prayer and Bible reading, Simon finally stood back to allow the guards to transport the prisoner back to his cell. Simon had laid the Bible into the prisoner’s hands urging him to read it throughout the night and gain all the knowledge of the Lord that he could.

 

“I ain’t able to read,” the prisoner admitted for the first time in his life.

 

“With God, all things are possible. Believe in Him and He will show you the way.”

 

The prisoner immediately missed Simon’s eyes, the moment he turned from him to float out of the room.

 

“Hold up a sec,” he said as he turned toward the small man. “Simon,” the prisoner paused insecurely, “My… my name is… is… Thomas.”

 

Noticing the sudden change in the man’s eyes before him–like a veil had been pulled away, Simon replied, “It is remarkable to meet you, Thomas.”

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9 Responses to Entombed in Indifference

  1. LouAnn says:

    Wow! When are you going to write that novel that is running around in your head! That was amazing. I could feel the darkness…and then the light of Jesus!

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  2. Alexander Kranz says:

    That was awesome!

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  3. mom says:

    Wow! Just Wow!

    Liked by 1 person

  4. Naomi Robin says:

    Wow. Just wow. That was incredible. The emotion, and Thomas’ lack thereof was so powerful! Absolutely breathtaking.

    Liked by 1 person

  5. trekgrl says:

    Wow. Just wow. Eerily captivating and so powerful. The emotion, or lack thereof in The Vacuum’s case, is incredible. Absolutly breathtaking.

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  6. I hardly have words to express how incredibly powerful this story was. You must write a book! MUST! So many of your stories touch the deepest parts of my heart. They cause me to look at things differently. They cause me to pray differently for communities of people I have often overlooked– You so eloquently portray God’s redemptive, gracious, loving power over us, the lost, so clearly that no one can deny what He is capable of doing or who they are in Him after reading your stories. Your gift….is from Him. Thank you for sharing it with us over and over again! xoxo

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